On Writing the Novel, Part One
by kateelliott on Sep.23, 2009, under Kate Elliott and Ken Scholes
KATE:
My bad. My spouse travels a lot — and I mean a lot — for his work, and he arrived home Tuesday evening from the Gilbert Islands (google the battle of Tarawa, if you’re interested in where he was) and I totally forgot to post. So, here we go.
ON WRITING NOVELS
KATE:
Ken, you mentioned to me on the phone that because of various difficult life tragedies and stresses in your last couple of years that you have not yet had the chance to develop a “system” or “pattern” or “routine” for writing a novel.
As I recall, because I was transcribing your words as you spoke, you said that, “I don’t know how I write novels, I just write them,” and “you just keep trying something until you find something that works.”
As a writer, I find both these statements quite profound and true. They remind me of Somerset Maugham’s famous declaration: “There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are.”
What’s been your experience in learning how to write novels?
KEN:
It’s been quite learning curve. LAMENATION was written, without an outline, on a dare in a six week binge of writing in every gap of time that I wasn’t sleeping or at the day job. CANTICLE was outlined and interrupted by the death of my Mom and the death of my nephew, leaving me a gap of months where I couldn’t find any words. And the outline? Well, I wrote it out and then never opened the file again. With ANTIPHON, I didn’t work off an outline but again, Life — or rather Death — Happened and I found work stopped cold for another chunk of months by the death of my father. With REQUIEM, my newest Bits of Life Happening — daughters Lizzy and Rachel — will no doubt inform and impact my process. So there’s not been enough consistency for me to know exactly how I do this. And I still don’t often know whether or not I’m doing it well. I really have to trust the mirrors and drive with my eye on them. My first readers and my editor — the exceptional Beth Meacham at Tor — are my best guides for knowing whether or not the car is on the right road moving at the right speed in the right direction.
As I mentioned in the earlier post, I do have a structural map that I work from in writing the novels and guiding the series as far as how much room to give the characters and the basic bones I’m adding the meat and muscle to. But as far as the actual drafting — pacing scene by scene and tying it all together and laying down the words and suspense-building and character-development — it’s largely organic and I’m writing it by ear in much the same way I’d learn a song for the guitar. Pause. Listen. Write. Pause. Listen. Write.
I find writing to be a heuristic process. I try one thing and if it doesn’t work, I try another until I find something that gets me where I need to go. For me, the act of writing is often the act of tricking my muse (Leroy) into doing his work. I find ways to make it fun, make it a puzzle, make it a game.
What about you? How do you tackle novels? You’ve published 19 novels over the last 21 years. How was it when you started? How did it evolve over time? Do you find now that you have a consistent process that works or do you still change it up from time to time?
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